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Tue Jan 23, 2007, 1:16 PM
Hi.
I didn't like to say goodbye
But I know this is better
So I can still live in the letter
I've tried to be vague
Before my poems become a plague


Sad were my ways
And still they are
They trickle through the days
Reflecting the rays of the star
That shines with a most painful sorrow
So bright, and so beautiful
A fountain that needed no tomorrow
Words tumbled forth so plentiful
Now I am gone form that fair shrine
Memories of which haunt my heart
Forced from that I made, I do pine
Now I must reluctantly depart
I've taken with me my gold
My treausre, my rubies and pearls
Into winds tearing over the ground so cold
At the end of the path that twists and curls
Now once more my seeds I will sow
Forwith the hope clothed in petals shall grow

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Thankyou for the beautiful poems you shared..
I can't help wondering, if you think in rhymes
Wouldn’t it annoy your friends, muddle up the times?
Using that some old rhyme scheme
Over and over again
Wouldn’t it loose interest? The minds of you readers feign?
But it's ok; your lines make me smile
I think I might watch you and read your comments for a while. :boogie:

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...and then the words seemed to fly off the page and weave themselves into a beautiful picture...

Behold. the powers of the mighty Beatnik :meditate:
Hey! Thanks for the favorite on "Wait Up For Me"!

I know it's way long overdue, I've been very busy. :)
Thanks for the fav :aww:

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